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Thread: Request for your help in reviewing the Holocron Text

Dracoblood
Wed Mar 10, 2004 8:13 pm
#14

Chapter Header: Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)


Subchapter Header: In-Game Trouble Shooting


17th question: My guild leader's gone....


Spacing error before answer.




Chapter Header: Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)


Subchapter Header: Gamplay


6th question: I bought a pet in the....


Spacing error before question. Missing the (-) notation before question.





Chapter Header: Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)


Subchapter Header: Gamplay


24th question: There are a lot of people on my server who speak French/German/Spanish...


Missing the (-) notation before question.




Chapter Header: Crafting Items


Subchapter Header: Finding the Resources Required


Title: Foraging for Organic Resources


This description is misleading and wrong. Scouts cannot forage for organic "resources", only consumable items that give very very weak buffs. This probably shouldn't be under the "Crafting Items" section.




Chapter Header: Crafting Items


Subchapter Header: Crafting Assembly Phase


Second Sentence of 6th paragraph: However, if you suffer a Critical Failure, you won't complete item, and the resources you assigned to the schematic will be destroyed and lost forever!


This paragraph is no longer entirely accurate. Also, it should read "you won't complete the item".




Chapter Header:Welcome to Star Wars Galaxies


Subchapter Header: A Recap of the Tutorial


Title: Insuring Your Items


This entire section needs to be updated to reflect recent changes, regarding both factional PVP conflict and item decay.
FaceInTheCrowd
Wed Mar 10, 2004 8:50 pm
#15

Under the description for combat medic it says commandos can craft grenades. Didn't that change at release?




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Drunkenjedi420
Wed Mar 10, 2004 9:12 pm
#16

Hey Q Good luck with your Project sadly I dont have time - IM so wired with playing I wouldnt dare spend a hour Looking at the HOLOCRON - I never used it once. Also, I have to run a Bus. online and that takes time. If I do ever see anything Ill drop a Bug report or some sheeyat. Later dude good luck...


-Sazo



Sazo - Radiant
MY DIARY OF NGE
Big_Swifty
Wed Mar 10, 2004 10:30 pm
#17

I'm sorry Q - I know this is not the right place but there is a text bug that bothers me. Its the misspelling of the word encumberance in the description of composite armor (at least its composite if I remember correctly) It is sorrectly and incorrectly spelled in the same description.


Cheers





ØþeasCommander, In Her Royal Highness' Secret ServiceTempest's oldest surviving Armorsmith no longer
+32 Armor Experimentation, +20 Force Experimentation, +20 Force Assembly, RIS Certified, etc.
Universal Exports Armor: Riverlands, Corellia **CLOSED**

- I support going back in time to 1967 You can too
Big_Swifty
Wed Mar 10, 2004 10:31 pm
#18

I cant't edit here? Perhaps I should watch MY spelling.



ØþeasCommander, In Her Royal Highness' Secret ServiceTempest's oldest surviving Armorsmith no longer
+32 Armor Experimentation, +20 Force Experimentation, +20 Force Assembly, RIS Certified, etc.
Universal Exports Armor: Riverlands, Corellia **CLOSED**

- I support going back in time to 1967 You can too
GuntherSlag
Wed Mar 10, 2004 10:32 pm
#19

LMAO...you can cut the sarcasm with a knife on this thread.

BTW..is the holocron that little box that popped up when I took my first step in this existence. I chucked that in the trash compactor a long time ago.

I suggest contacting Megadodo Publications for help in constructing a more consice and relevant guide to exploring the galaxy. Of course they'll probably just tell you to ditch the free melon and give everyone a towel, but hey..what do THEY know.



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TelekFragger
Wed Mar 10, 2004 10:53 pm
#20

back in beta combat medics had bacta grenades
BlueOx
Wed Mar 10, 2004 11:30 pm
#21

Back when the in-game text errors thread was still active, I got ambitious and wrote down these ones from the Holocron, but never got around to posting them:

Welcome->Tutorial Recap->Cloning -- Graf 4: Incorrect text. Players now clone with all their items. Graf 5: Is the /activateclone command still in use? I thought it was a temporary bug workaround and had been removed shortly after launch.

Welcome->Tutorial Recap->Insuring -- Refers incorrectly throughout to spawning without your uninsured items.

Welcome->Tutorial Recap->Advancing -- Graf 3: "...you can view the skills trees for the professions your characters has...". Should be "skill trees" (no "s") to match with same phrase later in the paragraph. Graf 4: Incorrectly says Scout trainers are found in Commerce Guilds. They are found in Combat Guilds.

Welcome->Where to begin->Exploring->Cloning Facility -- Graf 2: Refers incorrectly throughout to items being left on your corpse.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Artisan->Resources-- Grafs 6&7: Refers to "exhausting the sampleable resources" in an area. I was under the impression this had been removed from the game during Beta.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Artisan->Artisan Disciplines -- Graf 5: Incorrectly refers to survey skill affecting how well you use harvesters. All harvester modifiers in the survey tree were removed in Beta.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Artisan->Where from here -- Graf 3: "Armorsmiths offer the galaxies best protection..." Should be "offer the galaxy's best protection" (possessive, not plural). Graf 9: Run-on sentence. Just split it in two at the comma.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Entertainer -- Graf 3: "...things would get down right hostile in the Cantina..." Should be "downright" as a single word.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Entertainer->Entertainer Disciplines -- Graf 4: "This discipline is the Entertainers ability to dance." Should be "Entertainer's" (possessive, not plural).

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Entertainer->Where from here -- Graf 4: Incorrectly refers to Master Medic being a requirement for Image Designers. This was removed in Beta.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Medic->Stimpacks->Healing Exercise->Healing Complete -- Graf 1: Misplaced text referring to the scout mission, not the medic mission.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Medic->Where from here -- Graf 3: Incorrectly mentions the scout exploration line is a requirement for Bio-engineer. This was changed in Beta. Bio-engineers only need Org.Chem from Medic and Hunting from Scout. Graf 4: Needs to be removed entirely. Medic is no longer a requirement for Image Designer. Graf 5: Incorrectly says Master Marksman is required for Combat Medic. Only the Ranged Support line from Marksman is currently required, along with Master Medic.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Brawler->About weapons -- Graf 2: "This class weapons covers most one-handed weapons" Needs the word "of" inserted to read "This class of weapons..."

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Brawler->Where from here -- Graf 1: "There are several of advanced professions available..." Needs the word "of" removed to read "There are several advanced..."Graf 6: Incorrectly says Master Brawler is required for Commando. Only the unarmed line is required, in addition to Master Marksman.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Marksman->Where from here -- Graf 7: Reference to Commandos needing Master Brawler should be removed. They only need the unarmed brawling line.

Welcome->Where to begin->Starting Professions->Scout->How to earn xp -- Graf 4: Incorrectly says Wilderness xp can be earned by foraging. Scout foraging currently grants no xp of any kind. Successfully catching a fish, though, does earn Wilderness xp. Perhaps that can be substituted in the sentence.



Girnan Yi'tey (Gorath)
Master Tailor ~ Master Architect ~ Master Artisan ~ Pesky Old Lady

bwjedi
Wed Mar 10, 2004 11:57 pm
#22

Under "The Galaxies Inhabitants" and for the planet Rori, it mentions Kaadu as one of the creatures you will find there. There are no Kaadu on Rori (except for maybe a pet or two).
Tauntaun99
Thu Mar 11, 2004 2:11 am
#23

The Galaxy-> Dantooine-> Mentions that the Empire has found the rebel base. If this were true, a quick scan by the local outpost would detect that Mon Mothma and the leaders of the alliance are there. No clue as to a solution, as there should be no reasonthe alliance is there, especially at the highestlevels. Also mentions that the Dantari live 'completely unaware of the Civil War', which I find impossible with the new establishment of Dantooine as one of the largest battlegrounds during the Clone Wars.


The Galaxy-> Yavin IV-> Mentions that the Empire has 're-directed most of it's forces to Yavin IV', which would mean several billion troops would be there. Should be 're-directed a considerable amout of it's forces to Yavin IV'. Also mentions the Rebels are upholding resistence, which is impossible since they were ordered to retreat right after the destruction of the Death Star. Could say 'isolated units of Rebels are active in guerrila warfare'.


The Galaxy-> Talus-> Mentions 'Talus has remained largely neutral', which can't be true as it has the largest Rebel and Imperial bases in the game, including the predominent Imperial Outpost. Could say 'Officially, Talus has remained neutral... however...'.


Combat-> Galactic Civil War-> PvP Rules->Has heavy mentions to the battlefields, which have been deactivated and are being redesigned.


-Dolan Ledgar, Chilastra

R2DADROID
Thu Mar 11, 2004 3:31 am
#24

Q:


can you re-open the old threads about text and loading screen errors?


they were fun to add to, and I have been really happy when I notice things have changed because of what we've written there.


Carbineer profession name's spelling has changed. "You stop following the corpse of x" now reads "you stop following x" (it was funny before but it makes more sense now). The opening screen no longer says "Planetside is a registered trademark of Sony Online Entertainment." Some less awkward grammar here and there. Various other changes I've noticed and have appreciated.


I notice more things but have no place to write them downon the forums, andI'm too much of a mess to keep lists of stuff likethat around on scraps of paper.


You could keep those threads open and pop in every once in a while, like every few weeks, just to say something like, "I've read and taken note of all the stuff up to this point and wont get to the rest for a while, but please keep adding to the list if you want."


Thanks again for listening to us and making the changes you have madeas fast as you have.


Small stuff like this is really speaking volumes about how good the level of communication between the devs and the players is becoming.


As for the Holocron, I looked at it on purpose (I often click it open by mistake while trying to hit something else)for the first time in many months just tonight.


I was impressed with how much it's been fleshed out from when I first looked at it. In Beta 3 it was just an empty shell of a thing. It's come a long way.




R2



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Tal-N
Thu Mar 11, 2004 4:38 am
#25

The information describing the commando profession is totally wrong, it's still talking about them making grenades and such. Also you need to totally re-do everything in reguards to combat, death, insurance and decay since its still talking about corpse runs.



Tal-N Chratk
Ahazi Master Bioengineer / Hunt Master / Rifleman
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Atteke
Thu Mar 11, 2004 6:02 am
#26

In the "General Mount Information" section is lists the 6 current mounts so rememberto update it when Publish 7 goes live



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