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JoKen_Jash
Tue Jun 21, 2005 4:44 pm
#40
Hmm, I thought we were going with the "Mandos who want to give help to the Alliance and I'm sent to check out if it's legit and kinda end up realizing I'm mando..."
RC-1140
Tue Jun 21, 2005 4:49 pm
#41
Oh, sorry JoKen, I thought I read something about you suppressing your inner Mandalorian because you thought the Alliance would disapprove or something. I guess I was wrong. You didn't really mention it in your bio, so I kinda made some stuff up. I could just say you came to get me after you discovered you were a Mandalorian.
JoKen_Jash
Tue Jun 21, 2005 5:14 pm
#42
Yeah, at the current point I'm not even aware that I am mandalorian. The only mention of it is the parents being killed or disappeared when he was young part. So he really has no idea where his parents came from, where they went, if they're still alive or not, who they were, ect...
Pryu2002
Wed Jun 22, 2005 4:49 pm
#43
Name: Ki-Okami Koryu
Affliction: Rebel (Just to be able to fight against a better opponent)
Rank: Private at the moment.
Notes:
Currently serving the Rebellion with a 'small' group of soldiers, Ki-Okami relishes a good fight and is always looking for the next big kill. When Ki is not in a battle frenzy, he likes to 'tweak' weapons and armor to get the best out of them. Ki cares nothing for who wins the battle, just as long as the fight is worthwhile. He has recently heard of a new ambasador from the Rebellion and is waiting to see what will come of the new alliance between them. Ki-Okami hopes his leaders faith in the Republic will pan out and land him in some of the biggest battles to be told for the next millenia.
This will be my first attempt at the whole bio/RPing thing and any help would be appreciated 
SuperTrando
Thu Jun 23, 2005 7:09 pm
#44
Name: Xanatoz
Affliction: Neutral, but supports Rebellion
Rank: None
Previous Assignment: Classified
Current Assignment: Classified
Notes:
Xanatoz was born on the planet Dosha, the Trandoshan homeworld, shortly before the Clone Wars started. He grew up in the care of both his parents and his clan. He trained in unarmed combat and combat with many different types of ranged weapons and accelled in every area. He went through the trials at an age younger than most and came out victorious, earning the respect of his clan and brethren. Soon, he decided it was time to leave his homeworldand explore the galaxy and hone his skills with bigger challenges. He became a smuggler, eluding anyone who tracked him and transporting anything for whoever paid the most. Unlike most of his kind, he found that ranged weapons were better than just fighting with his claws. He lived a life of smuggling and crime for almost five years, but he longed to go back to his homeworld and see his clan again. He found his opportunity to visit his homeworld again on a smuggling run that ran right through his system. He made a side trip and stopped at his homeworld. When he stepped out of his ship he saw chaos everywhere. The village huts were on fire, there were bodies of his brethren strewn across the ground, and men, humans he presumed, clad in white armor were herding his remaining brethren onto a ship, bound together like common animals. Xanatoz was suddenly filled with a rage he had never felt before. He forgot all about his weapons and jumped at the men, grabbing them and throwing them everywhere. He punched them, kicked them, bit them, and clawed at them until every last one of them was dead. All of a sudden he snapped back and the rage left him. His brethren were cheering for him as he took the restraints off of them with his laser knife.
These events are what led to the forming of a group of Trandoshan Commandos. They had been trained in the Mandalorian arts by a strange man who had visited their planet while Xanatoz was away. As soon as they were formed they trained Xanatoz in those arts and he became the leader of the group. This group successfully led raids on every Imperial outpost (that's what Xanatoz now understood them as being called) on the planet. They freed slaves, got more men, gathered supplies, and liberated many different parts of the planet. On one assignment though, everything went horribly wrong. On a routine mission to take out an outpost on the outskirts of the area where the Commandos were stationed, Xanatoz underestimated the number of Imperials stationed there. He went with a team of thirty Trandoshan Commandos and stormed the outpost. They met only twenty Imperials there and took the Outpost with ease, but right as they were about to secure it, a whole garrison of Imperial Stormtroopers stormed the area and killed all of the Commandos and captured Xanatoz. He was chained, stripped of everything valuable or useable, and thrown ina cell in the underground part of the outpost. After nearly three months in solitary confinement with barely any food or drink, Xanatoz heard blaster fire outside his cell door. He looked up in time to see a strange man open the door. He didn't look like an Imperial, Xanatoz thought to himself. The man was dressed in desert camoflauge and he was holding a pistol and a flamethrower similar to the one the Trandoshan Commandos used to use. "Take this," the man said, tossing Xanatoz the flamethrower. He immediately got up and ran out the door following the man. Every guard Xanatoz met along the way was left in flames behind him. Once far outside the outpost the man turned around and said to him,"I need your help Xanatoz." "Why should I trust you?" he said instinctively. "Listen, if I make one wrong move you can shoot me," the man said calmly. He stood there and listened as the man told him about a secret Rebel operation codenamed Vode Inya. Xanatoz had learned Mandalorian from one of his brethren after he liberated them. "Brothers in flame?" Xanatoz said. "Yes," the man said, "it is a special Mandalorian Commando operation started by the Rebellion on Lok and I'm here to recruit you." "How many of you are there?" he asked. "You are one of the first," the man said. "I am going to recruit more soon, the Alliance has already picked the members." Xanatoz pondered these things for many minutes. "So will you join?" the man asked. "Yes," he answered. That one word led Xanatoz to a secret base on Lok where he know trains and hones his skills alongside others in the operation that will one day bring down the Empire.
Well, this was my first realy Roleplay biography that I've written so any input would be great. I'm sorry about bringing this thread back up again and about how long the post is. Wait, no I'm not.
Ryubushi
Thu Jun 23, 2005 7:22 pm
#45
Name: Ja'ahn Woo
Sex: Male
Species: Jawa
Age: 21
Height: Over 1 meter (4')
Affiliation: Rebel Alliance
Profile: Ja'ahnn fears nothing, and is overly hostile/violent. His mentality is the result of a recessive gene in his family that skips a generation and causes a chemical imbalance in the brain (most likely an over-abundance of testosterone). His grandfather, Horrigan (called Grandpa Woo by Ja'ahn), was just as violent as Ja'ahn, yet own his father was an average Jawa. Ja'ahn's affliction has made his behavior unpredictable, and his actions are usually socially inacceptable.
Ja'ahn's clan, anxious to be rid of him, signed him up with an Alliance recruiter. No squad in the Alliance is crazy enough to accept Ja'ahn as a member of their own, due to the fact that he keeps failing all psychiatric evaluations and is quite...unstable.
Quotes:
"Click, click, boom, b1tch!
"This hand of mine glows with an awesome power... I call it a thermal."
"Woo-style!"
I haven't figured out how in the hell he ends up with Vode Inya, or why they'd be nuts enough to allow him in. I'll let our fearless leader Joken sort that one out!
Sex: Male
Species: Jawa
Age: 21
Height: Over 1 meter (4')
Affiliation: Rebel Alliance
Profile: Ja'ahnn fears nothing, and is overly hostile/violent. His mentality is the result of a recessive gene in his family that skips a generation and causes a chemical imbalance in the brain (most likely an over-abundance of testosterone). His grandfather, Horrigan (called Grandpa Woo by Ja'ahn), was just as violent as Ja'ahn, yet own his father was an average Jawa. Ja'ahn's affliction has made his behavior unpredictable, and his actions are usually socially inacceptable.
Ja'ahn's clan, anxious to be rid of him, signed him up with an Alliance recruiter. No squad in the Alliance is crazy enough to accept Ja'ahn as a member of their own, due to the fact that he keeps failing all psychiatric evaluations and is quite...unstable.
Quotes:
"Click, click, boom, b1tch!
"This hand of mine glows with an awesome power... I call it a thermal."
"Woo-style!"
I haven't figured out how in the hell he ends up with Vode Inya, or why they'd be nuts enough to allow him in. I'll let our fearless leader Joken sort that one out!
Message Edited by Ryubushi on 06-23-2005 09:09 PM
craftr
Thu Jun 23, 2005 7:40 pm
#46
++++++++++++++Incoming Transmison++++++++++++++++
Message Originating: Corel Sector Forces Headquartesr, Darklen Drath, Commander
Message Destination: Office of Perssonel, Alliance High Command
Message Subject: Personnel Review, Private Ce'tan
++++++++++++++Transmison Begins++++++++++++++++++
Last Name-(none) First Name- Ce'tan
Sex- Male
Species- Bothan
Height- Short
Weight- Not Much
Eyes- 2
Skin- Furry
Parents- Unkown
Status- Under Review for negligent behavior and endangerment of civilians due to substance abuse
Training- Alliance Basic Training -
Completed: Preliminary Marksmanship Training
Completed: Secondary Marksmanship Training: Focus-Carbines
Completed: Advanced Marksmanship Training: Ranged Tactics and Support
Completed: Preliminary Unarmed Training
Completed: Preliminary Medical Knowledge
Completed: Preliminary First Aid
Completed: Preliminary Field Medical Training
Completed: Advanced Field Medical Training
Failed: Prelimary Field Scouting Training
Failed: Preliminary Inteligence Gathering Trest
Failed: Aptitude and Mental Assesment Test
Failed: Piloting Assesment Test
Medical Evaluation-
Eyesight: Excellent
Physical Fitness: Poor
Hearing: Average
Smell: Good
Reaction Time: good
Diet/Nutrition: Very Poor
Notes:
Soldier displays short, slight build, Good build and bone structure, however, High ratio of Fat to Muscle. Internal organs appear healty, with exception of Liver. Patient Suffers from substance abuse with regards to Alcohol(particularly vassarian Brandy) see psyhc evaluation for further details.
Psychiatrict Evaluation:
Subject displays solid inteligence skills in the field, yet consistently fails skill assesment tests. A high aptitude for Battelfield healing and a desire to help others through healing is noted. Is percevied to be lazy by his peers yet can achomplish much hard work in short spans of time if motivated corectly. Frequently reports for duty while under the influence of alcoholic substances, occasional drug use also noted(see entries on "Neutron Pixie" and "shadopaw"). Substance abuse most likely originates from past traumatic experiences involvling "Mandalorians" and Kittens, about which the subject is very evasive when pressed, becoming quite violent in one instance. Exhibits the extreme loaylty inhernt in most Bothans but lacks other bothan traits such as inteligence gathering and analyzation skills. Subject appears fixated on and unusually attached to loud noises and bright flashes of light, explosives and explosive devices in particular(see incident report 11375-2).
Comanding Officers Notes:
Lazy, inept, soldier, disobeys orders, reports for duty drunk, insluts his superiors, yet is loyal to his comrades, despite being shunned by them. Does perform well when given clear objectives and a means to acomplish them. Recomd to his next comanding officer, Give him a Rocket Launcher and a pack of stims and unleash him on the enemy, however, please keep him far far away from youre own lines and any civilans as he is prone to blowing things up randomly with no apparent reason.
Recomendations for personnel Placement:
Soldier fairs poorly in large battalions and standard battlefield units. Further Weapons Training with a Focus on Heavy Weapons recomended on grounds of his pleasure in "blowing st'ff up." Further Medical Training also Recomended. Suggest Imediate Rehab for substance abuse. Upon Completion, Recomend Imedieate Transfer to Small Special Operation Division where Loayalty to a small squad may properly motivate him. Prefer transfer to a squad with lack of contact with innocent civilians.
++++++++++++++++++Transmison Ends++++++++++++++++++
Message Originating: Corel Sector Forces Headquartesr, Darklen Drath, Commander
Message Destination: Office of Perssonel, Alliance High Command
Message Subject: Personnel Review, Private Ce'tan
++++++++++++++Transmison Begins++++++++++++++++++
Last Name-(none) First Name- Ce'tan
Sex- Male
Species- Bothan
Height- Short
Weight- Not Much
Eyes- 2
Skin- Furry
Parents- Unkown
Status- Under Review for negligent behavior and endangerment of civilians due to substance abuse
Training- Alliance Basic Training -
Completed: Preliminary Marksmanship Training
Completed: Secondary Marksmanship Training: Focus-Carbines
Completed: Advanced Marksmanship Training: Ranged Tactics and Support
Completed: Preliminary Unarmed Training
Completed: Preliminary Medical Knowledge
Completed: Preliminary First Aid
Completed: Preliminary Field Medical Training
Completed: Advanced Field Medical Training
Failed: Prelimary Field Scouting Training
Failed: Preliminary Inteligence Gathering Trest
Failed: Aptitude and Mental Assesment Test
Failed: Piloting Assesment Test
Medical Evaluation-
Eyesight: Excellent
Physical Fitness: Poor
Hearing: Average
Smell: Good
Reaction Time: good
Diet/Nutrition: Very Poor
Notes:
Soldier displays short, slight build, Good build and bone structure, however, High ratio of Fat to Muscle. Internal organs appear healty, with exception of Liver. Patient Suffers from substance abuse with regards to Alcohol(particularly vassarian Brandy) see psyhc evaluation for further details.
Psychiatrict Evaluation:
Subject displays solid inteligence skills in the field, yet consistently fails skill assesment tests. A high aptitude for Battelfield healing and a desire to help others through healing is noted. Is percevied to be lazy by his peers yet can achomplish much hard work in short spans of time if motivated corectly. Frequently reports for duty while under the influence of alcoholic substances, occasional drug use also noted(see entries on "Neutron Pixie" and "shadopaw"). Substance abuse most likely originates from past traumatic experiences involvling "Mandalorians" and Kittens, about which the subject is very evasive when pressed, becoming quite violent in one instance. Exhibits the extreme loaylty inhernt in most Bothans but lacks other bothan traits such as inteligence gathering and analyzation skills. Subject appears fixated on and unusually attached to loud noises and bright flashes of light, explosives and explosive devices in particular(see incident report 11375-2).
Comanding Officers Notes:
Lazy, inept, soldier, disobeys orders, reports for duty drunk, insluts his superiors, yet is loyal to his comrades, despite being shunned by them. Does perform well when given clear objectives and a means to acomplish them. Recomd to his next comanding officer, Give him a Rocket Launcher and a pack of stims and unleash him on the enemy, however, please keep him far far away from youre own lines and any civilans as he is prone to blowing things up randomly with no apparent reason.
Recomendations for personnel Placement:
Soldier fairs poorly in large battalions and standard battlefield units. Further Weapons Training with a Focus on Heavy Weapons recomended on grounds of his pleasure in "blowing st'ff up." Further Medical Training also Recomended. Suggest Imediate Rehab for substance abuse. Upon Completion, Recomend Imedieate Transfer to Small Special Operation Division where Loayalty to a small squad may properly motivate him. Prefer transfer to a squad with lack of contact with innocent civilians.
++++++++++++++++++Transmison Ends++++++++++++++++++
Message Edited by craftr on 06-23-2005 10:42 PM
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