Weaponsmith Archive
Thread: Some Feed back on my ad....
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Korlan
Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:52 pm
#1
Before I post a link to an advertisment I did on my server's Trade Froum.
I just want to let everyone know that, with this post,I am just looking for advice onthe ad'slayout.
I need to know feed back, and figured who better then my fellow WS's offer advice on something WS related.
Once again I just want some feed back on how to improve my ads.
Examples:
- Am i leaving something out?
- Too much color
- Not enough color
- Prices too high (for those on the same server)
- Anything you offer will help!!
I will wait a bit before i post to the link, as I don't want to upset the forums by this.... If someone replies that it not he place, then let me know now.
Thanks in advance.
Korlan
Wed Dec 22, 2004 4:13 pm
#2
Korlan
Wed Dec 22, 2004 4:21 pm
#3
Zandergeef wrote:
Looks alright to me. The prices look alright.. would give you more of an opinion on prices but Im not on your server. Do you actually sell much bone armor?
Thanks for you kind words. I understand not being able to say much on prices 
I am more concerned on if I took the right path with my ad, really interested in what other WS do to get people into their shops.
As for Bone Armor, I do pretty good with it, being +13 pts Artisan helps too.
If I put the armor up on the public Market, It sells like hot cakes, but is a pain ot drag 25-26 parts to a vendor in another town
On my ownvendors i do selljust theparts, but try to sell whole suits only.
I pay alot of attention to the material I use and get the res's really maxed out and as much con as I can.
Krayt by far sells the best as with a good slice you can get it up to 50% + eng protection.
The rest like Kimo and Rancor, with good slices you can reach near too 50%, more often then not high 40%. Not bad really in the long and short of things.
Zandergeef
Thu Dec 23, 2004 1:51 am
#4
Looks alright to me. The prices look alright.. would give you more of an opinion on prices but Im not on your server. Do you actually sell much bone armor?
Korlan
Fri Dec 24, 2004 5:35 am
#6
Rock-A-Fella wrote:
Very nice, it's perfect! Good job.
Thank you rockie...
Ybagi
Fri Dec 24, 2004 6:53 am
#7
Missing dash on DX-2 damage rating
Geonosian pistol stats are wrong, I think you copied FWG5 twice
Beam rifles don't work so they might be hard to sell
Laser rifle price seems low compared to other rifles, the E11 in particular
Geonosian pistol stats are wrong, I think you copied FWG5 twice
Beam rifles don't work so they might be hard to sell
Laser rifle price seems low compared to other rifles, the E11 in particular
Ybagi
Fri Dec 24, 2004 6:56 am
#8
Isn't energy a special protection on bone armour so you can't increase it with a slice
Maceey
Fri Dec 24, 2004 12:50 pm
#9
first of all prices are certainly not to high normal prices i think some are low some are higher
normal prices i think some are low some are higher However i would reduce the colors a little bit don't use to many different colors that's not so easy to read. The first part of the ad just hurts my eyes all the different colors to the wp info etc. Try using like 4 colors max and get a nice layout then it will probably be easier to read
and get a nice layout then it will probably be easier to read
Zandergeef
Sun Dec 26, 2004 1:37 pm
#10
One small thing on pricing:
You are selling vk's for 4k and the stats are 38-147 damage. This is pretty much the best you can get(unless you got lucky with some really high SR copper over 800).. you may be trying to keep your prices down but Im pretty sure you could get top dollar for this item.
Some weapons may look like they are not as good cause they dont have as high stats as say a power hammer or flame thrower but they are just as good and will sell like hot cakes. The VK is such an example. 147 damage vk's should sell well.
Korlan
Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:34 am
#11
Ybagi wrote:
Missing dash on DX-2 damage rating
Geonosian pistol stats are wrong, I think you copied FWG5 twice
Beam rifles don't work so they might be hard to sell
Laser rifle price seems low compared to other rifles, the E11 in particular
yeah someone else pointed that out to me 
Gotta get a fixed asap.... but computer is down atm..... but thanks for the heads up
Korlan
Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:35 am
#12
Maceey wrote:
first of all prices are certainly not to high
However i would reduce the colors a little bit don't use to many different colors that's not so easy to read. The first part of the ad just hurts my eyes all the different colors to the wp info etc. Try using like 4 colors max
cool, I'll give that try thanks
Korlan
Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:38 am
#13
I'll look in to it, I know other WS on my server are selling them for 10k I think, perhaps 6K will better suit my target. Thanks for the reply
Zandergeef wrote:
One small thing on pricing:
You are selling vk's for 4k and the stats are 38-147 damage. This is pretty much the best you can get(unless you got lucky with some really high SR copper over 800).. you may be trying to keep your prices down but Im pretty sure you could get top dollar for this item.
Some weapons may look like they are not as good cause they dont have as high stats as say a power hammer or flame thrower but they are just as good and will sell like hot cakes. The VK is such an example. 147 damage vk's should sell well.
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