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Thread: A Legend begins... (My RP attempt)
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JWing
Fri Mar 18, 2005 9:50 am
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I know lots of you out there are players from day 1. Since this was my 1st online game experience, and being such
a huge fan of STAR WARS, I played alot.
A real lot...hehe. Well I was able to be part og one of the 1st PA's on my server, and I believe the 1st PA to drop
on Dantooine. Man, I can remember how hard it use to be to travel from Argo Outpost the 1500m to our PA. Huurtons
were my worst enemy.
But back to the story. Its a tragic tale of a Rebel PA.
The Rise and Fall of the Lost Brigade.
:::Holo-Net Transmission 10023:3451:00034:::
-encryption sliced by ________.
-Following transmission believed to be the founding’s of The Lost Brigade
We find ourselves in a state of civil unrest, confusion and death.
Upon hundreds of years ago, the newborn Lost Brigade was formed by several break-away
leaders of the Galactic Senate. These leaders held the highest military positions, and
all shared in the same belief. Death and war had beaten them down, and taken their souls.
A change was needed.
The infamous leader Basker planted the seed of succession from the only known Galactic government.
His vision was to form a new society of non-combatant people. These people would use their specialty
in different fields to form a Galactic Commerce power no one had seen before. And so the Lost Brigade
was born.
Basker, with the help of the other “Founders” started recruiting the finest sentiments in their respected
fields. Soon, BRIG was squeezing their way into the trade routes, and was making a good name for themselves.
That’s when tragdy hit.
The deadly virus Xhibenol struck down Basker. It put him in an un-reversible state of coma. To this date,
Basker has only come out of this state 6 known times, only to communicate slightly, then fall back into
this unconscious state.
It was a heavy blow, but several captains stepped up, and took over the reigns of BRIG. The most prominent
member Delana soon took over many of the responsibilities of management, with the help of long time, and
mysterious member Dy’Kara.
Slowly members increased, and soon all the major fields of commerce were filled with the most worthy
members.. Life and prosperity flourished.
But, slowly the once mighty Galactic Senate started showing flaws, and the Jedi Knight couldn’t hold t
ogether justice. Separatists movements formed, and battles soon ripped the galaxy once again. Civil unrest
soon hit the galaxy, trade routes were no longer safe, and the Clone Wars struck fear throughout the known
worlds.
Soon a new rebellion arose to counter these threats, and found themselves grossly outnumbered. The Empire
had come to power…
The Lost Brigade seeing all this and feeling the heat of the broken and pirate ridden
trade routes, needed action. Their base of operations and their only known home lacked the resources to grow,
and the location was looked upon by novice travelers as a “deadly” planet. A change was needed.
This was the time of Imperial rule, and finally the Emperor saw fit to lift the ban on city expansion. That’s
when BRIG made their move. With great planning, spies, and insider information, BRIG was able to secure one of
the 10 prestigious city grants on one of the biggest commercial planets in the Core systems, Naboo.
Brigonia was born
Within weeks the city grew to alarming size, and offered all the amenaities of the most populated city’s.
Life was good.
But, once again tragdy struck at the heart of BRIG. Upon a survey mission to Dathomir, the high councils
ship Rezendous1 hit a sonic electrical storm. Systems started failing, the shields fell, and a maday went
out to Naboo.
:::: Were los ng pow r….life sup ort fail ng…………….:::
It was the voice of 1st officer Cyan. Soon the worst was confirmed by a deep space
salvage team. The ships main computer was salvaged and all information was shipped to the BRIG PA Hall
for further examination. It confirmed the worst, only 1 escape pod was launched, 5 bodies aboard. Rezendous1
was lost, all remaining passengers, dead. 9 partial bodies were recovered This tragdy took over 2/3’s of
the high council lives. We remember….
Delena, Cyan, Sparh’awk, Kalla, JeanLuc, Hoyo, Ambrozyah, Scorpius, Tailor, Sardis, and Diak.
Their service to the Rebellion will always be remembered.
The escape pod was never found, and the whereabouts of Special, Anomaly, Kalla, Primlrage, Intrus and Graise
are still unknown.
The blow to BRIG hit hard, the city fell into disarray. The Emperor soon took a hard stance against the Rebels,
and all their sympatherizers. Naboo was invaded by Imperial stormtroopers, and BRIG’s once endless economic
supply to out lying worlds was cut-off. Mass looting, and thugs soon moved into the once pristine city of Brigonia.
Plans were soon in the making of once again moving. Imperial pressure, the loss of so many comrades weighed
heavily on the remaining members. Action needed to be taken.
The order was finally given, and an immediate evacuation of Naboo was started. Over the next months the s
urviving members of the Lost Brigade returned to their roots on the quiet planet of Dantooine.
Upon on of the final transport mission from Naboo, the ship Skullus was targeted by a Star Destroyers tractor beam,
and was boarded. Once the ship hadn’t landed on Dantooine at the scheduled time, questions arose. Officer in charge
Pilov started questions the Galactic travel commission about the lost ship.
Before the Commission could respond, an Imperial general _________ visited Pilov in a holographic communication.
“I highly suggest you cease all inquiries into the ship known as Skullus.” “This ship was known to harbor known
Rebel sympathizers, and direct action was taken.” “Unless you wish future Imperial interactions into your guild,
I see only silence as your ally.”
Pilov was in shock. He immediately got the last members of BRIG together to state his findings. The Lost Brigades f
inal statement on the where-abouts of these members is listed as MIA.
Dy’Kara
Sybooth
Tolpien
Gaaroc
Anak
Thimo
Dronayus
Darminicus
:::Holo-Net Transmission ended 10023:3451:09954:::
:::Holo-Net Transmission 12541:256599:001457:::
Operational Log by Doctor ________ ; Interrogation Unit 20078
“These would-be Rebels seem to know nothing of the resistance, or even anything concerning
the increase of Rebel troop movement in the Naboo system.” “All know truth serums as well
as all known tactics have been used to extract information concerning the Rebellion.” “All
have failed.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54187 Patient known as Anak:::
“Prisoner hasn’t fully recovered from the deep mind probe issued 7 days ago.” “I believe this
one is a full loss.” “Will be moved to the Human Organic-reconstruction corridor for further study.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54198 Patient known as Gaaroc:::
“Started injection of Jig Bella serum 3.2 liters over 1 hour time span” No change in prisoner’s story.
“Increased dosage to 5 liters due to the wookies ability to fight off the serum. Still no change.”
“Prisoner will be reassigned to Imperial Prison Labor Camp -Star’s End.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54254 Patient known as Dy’Kara:::
“This one seems to be the infamous and most dangerous Dy’Kara.” “All studies show this sentiment to
be one of the last members of the Bounty Hunters Guild before its untimely demise.” “All attempts to
remove this rare version of composite armor have failed due to unknown numbers of anti-tampering devices.”
“Geonosian Acryllicaz acid was used to melt a portion of the helmet in order to inject mind enhancing
agents.” “Prisoners brain waves have fallen, and recovery is doubtful.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54277 Patient known as Dronayus:::
“Prisoner’s brain mass seems to be larger than a normal Corellian.” “All attempts to reach the core
cerebrum to extract information have failed.” “I have deemed this one to be some what of the leader due
to the large amount of encrypted data in his brain.” “Further studies are needed.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54299 Patient : Tolpien:::
“Damn these small Bothans.” “So easily they are damaged.” “Prisoner somehow used a smuggled Bio-Engineered
pill, which placed him in a coma-like state.” “While trying to revive the prisoner, severe damage was inflicted
to the digestive system, and further treatment is necessary.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54587 Patient known as Thimo:::
“All known data on this subject points toward a long forgotten word….JEDI.” “Secret reports clearly state his
involvement in the rebirth of this deadly order.” “After successfully pulling a small amount of data from this
subject, a code red was given, and Imperial Dark-Troopers have taken over the situation. “Upon orders from
Lord Vader himself, this prisoner has been “erased” from all known knowledge bases, data files, and Holo-Net
communications.” “Prisoner was released from my control…”
::: Communication Log 1645:54656 Patient known as Darminicus:::
After reviewing the general examination of this Zabrek, it seems that her holds many of the same traits and physical
attributes as Dy’kara. This started me thinking, and I ran a few more tests. My theory was proven correct. Darminicus
is one of the last known clones in the galaxy. He is almost a perfect copy of his master. Patient removed from my
custody, and placed in a high security area for further examination.
::: Communication Log 1645:54668 Patient known as Sybooth:::
“General _______ seemed extremely pleased in finally capturing his long time nemesis, Rogue Smuggler, Sybooth.”
“The right forearm, scared with R-E-B-E-L from their first encounter, confirmed it was indeed him.” “Drain this one
of EVERYTHING, screamed the General.” “He even went as far as to authorize a Drone-Scan.” “Even I had to do some
research on how to properly do such a treatment.” “But, I did know that the mind changes were irreversible, and that
his existence had ended.
:::Concluding Summary:::
All patients with the exception of Thimo, have been a complete loss. No information retrieved, nor any will’s broken.
I highly suggest immediate termination and salvage of any needed organic parts for future study, before sedation ends.
Prisoners HIGHLY DANGEROUS, all known security measures to be taken and followed…..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,Shhhhhhhhhggdfjsfjdsgjk;
Wlklbvklbkfdbkfl;bnkklkk… .jfdshfioe w[f;[lcoi]fd;l]ewa[pf\ewf;\ ];p;][ l[pkre[a]dpfl k[pdiepoal][sp]Q[O-0E2385I VO43 8-GK-EW8040T-
:::Transmission Ended, slice failed……..
:::Holo-Net Transmission 12541:256599:001457:::
a huge fan of STAR WARS, I played alot.
A real lot...hehe. Well I was able to be part og one of the 1st PA's on my server, and I believe the 1st PA to drop
on Dantooine. Man, I can remember how hard it use to be to travel from Argo Outpost the 1500m to our PA. Huurtons
were my worst enemy.
But back to the story. Its a tragic tale of a Rebel PA.
The Rise and Fall of the Lost Brigade.
:::Holo-Net Transmission 10023:3451:00034:::
-encryption sliced by ________.
-Following transmission believed to be the founding’s of The Lost Brigade
We find ourselves in a state of civil unrest, confusion and death.
Upon hundreds of years ago, the newborn Lost Brigade was formed by several break-away
leaders of the Galactic Senate. These leaders held the highest military positions, and
all shared in the same belief. Death and war had beaten them down, and taken their souls.
A change was needed.
The infamous leader Basker planted the seed of succession from the only known Galactic government.
His vision was to form a new society of non-combatant people. These people would use their specialty
in different fields to form a Galactic Commerce power no one had seen before. And so the Lost Brigade
was born.
Basker, with the help of the other “Founders” started recruiting the finest sentiments in their respected
fields. Soon, BRIG was squeezing their way into the trade routes, and was making a good name for themselves.
That’s when tragdy hit.
The deadly virus Xhibenol struck down Basker. It put him in an un-reversible state of coma. To this date,
Basker has only come out of this state 6 known times, only to communicate slightly, then fall back into
this unconscious state.
It was a heavy blow, but several captains stepped up, and took over the reigns of BRIG. The most prominent
member Delana soon took over many of the responsibilities of management, with the help of long time, and
mysterious member Dy’Kara.
Slowly members increased, and soon all the major fields of commerce were filled with the most worthy
members.. Life and prosperity flourished.
But, slowly the once mighty Galactic Senate started showing flaws, and the Jedi Knight couldn’t hold t
ogether justice. Separatists movements formed, and battles soon ripped the galaxy once again. Civil unrest
soon hit the galaxy, trade routes were no longer safe, and the Clone Wars struck fear throughout the known
worlds.
Soon a new rebellion arose to counter these threats, and found themselves grossly outnumbered. The Empire
had come to power…
The Lost Brigade seeing all this and feeling the heat of the broken and pirate ridden
trade routes, needed action. Their base of operations and their only known home lacked the resources to grow,
and the location was looked upon by novice travelers as a “deadly” planet. A change was needed.
This was the time of Imperial rule, and finally the Emperor saw fit to lift the ban on city expansion. That’s
when BRIG made their move. With great planning, spies, and insider information, BRIG was able to secure one of
the 10 prestigious city grants on one of the biggest commercial planets in the Core systems, Naboo.
Brigonia was born
Within weeks the city grew to alarming size, and offered all the amenaities of the most populated city’s.
Life was good.
But, once again tragdy struck at the heart of BRIG. Upon a survey mission to Dathomir, the high councils
ship Rezendous1 hit a sonic electrical storm. Systems started failing, the shields fell, and a maday went
out to Naboo.
:::: Were los ng pow r….life sup ort fail ng…………….:::
It was the voice of 1st officer Cyan. Soon the worst was confirmed by a deep space
salvage team. The ships main computer was salvaged and all information was shipped to the BRIG PA Hall
for further examination. It confirmed the worst, only 1 escape pod was launched, 5 bodies aboard. Rezendous1
was lost, all remaining passengers, dead. 9 partial bodies were recovered This tragdy took over 2/3’s of
the high council lives. We remember….
Delena, Cyan, Sparh’awk, Kalla, JeanLuc, Hoyo, Ambrozyah, Scorpius, Tailor, Sardis, and Diak.
Their service to the Rebellion will always be remembered.
The escape pod was never found, and the whereabouts of Special, Anomaly, Kalla, Primlrage, Intrus and Graise
are still unknown.
The blow to BRIG hit hard, the city fell into disarray. The Emperor soon took a hard stance against the Rebels,
and all their sympatherizers. Naboo was invaded by Imperial stormtroopers, and BRIG’s once endless economic
supply to out lying worlds was cut-off. Mass looting, and thugs soon moved into the once pristine city of Brigonia.
Plans were soon in the making of once again moving. Imperial pressure, the loss of so many comrades weighed
heavily on the remaining members. Action needed to be taken.
The order was finally given, and an immediate evacuation of Naboo was started. Over the next months the s
urviving members of the Lost Brigade returned to their roots on the quiet planet of Dantooine.
Upon on of the final transport mission from Naboo, the ship Skullus was targeted by a Star Destroyers tractor beam,
and was boarded. Once the ship hadn’t landed on Dantooine at the scheduled time, questions arose. Officer in charge
Pilov started questions the Galactic travel commission about the lost ship.
Before the Commission could respond, an Imperial general _________ visited Pilov in a holographic communication.
“I highly suggest you cease all inquiries into the ship known as Skullus.” “This ship was known to harbor known
Rebel sympathizers, and direct action was taken.” “Unless you wish future Imperial interactions into your guild,
I see only silence as your ally.”
Pilov was in shock. He immediately got the last members of BRIG together to state his findings. The Lost Brigades f
inal statement on the where-abouts of these members is listed as MIA.
Dy’Kara
Sybooth
Tolpien
Gaaroc
Anak
Thimo
Dronayus
Darminicus
:::Holo-Net Transmission ended 10023:3451:09954:::
:::Holo-Net Transmission 12541:256599:001457:::
Operational Log by Doctor ________ ; Interrogation Unit 20078
“These would-be Rebels seem to know nothing of the resistance, or even anything concerning
the increase of Rebel troop movement in the Naboo system.” “All know truth serums as well
as all known tactics have been used to extract information concerning the Rebellion.” “All
have failed.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54187 Patient known as Anak:::
“Prisoner hasn’t fully recovered from the deep mind probe issued 7 days ago.” “I believe this
one is a full loss.” “Will be moved to the Human Organic-reconstruction corridor for further study.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54198 Patient known as Gaaroc:::
“Started injection of Jig Bella serum 3.2 liters over 1 hour time span” No change in prisoner’s story.
“Increased dosage to 5 liters due to the wookies ability to fight off the serum. Still no change.”
“Prisoner will be reassigned to Imperial Prison Labor Camp -Star’s End.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54254 Patient known as Dy’Kara:::
“This one seems to be the infamous and most dangerous Dy’Kara.” “All studies show this sentiment to
be one of the last members of the Bounty Hunters Guild before its untimely demise.” “All attempts to
remove this rare version of composite armor have failed due to unknown numbers of anti-tampering devices.”
“Geonosian Acryllicaz acid was used to melt a portion of the helmet in order to inject mind enhancing
agents.” “Prisoners brain waves have fallen, and recovery is doubtful.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54277 Patient known as Dronayus:::
“Prisoner’s brain mass seems to be larger than a normal Corellian.” “All attempts to reach the core
cerebrum to extract information have failed.” “I have deemed this one to be some what of the leader due
to the large amount of encrypted data in his brain.” “Further studies are needed.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54299 Patient : Tolpien:::
“Damn these small Bothans.” “So easily they are damaged.” “Prisoner somehow used a smuggled Bio-Engineered
pill, which placed him in a coma-like state.” “While trying to revive the prisoner, severe damage was inflicted
to the digestive system, and further treatment is necessary.”
::: Communication Log 1645:54587 Patient known as Thimo:::
“All known data on this subject points toward a long forgotten word….JEDI.” “Secret reports clearly state his
involvement in the rebirth of this deadly order.” “After successfully pulling a small amount of data from this
subject, a code red was given, and Imperial Dark-Troopers have taken over the situation. “Upon orders from
Lord Vader himself, this prisoner has been “erased” from all known knowledge bases, data files, and Holo-Net
communications.” “Prisoner was released from my control…”
::: Communication Log 1645:54656 Patient known as Darminicus:::
After reviewing the general examination of this Zabrek, it seems that her holds many of the same traits and physical
attributes as Dy’kara. This started me thinking, and I ran a few more tests. My theory was proven correct. Darminicus
is one of the last known clones in the galaxy. He is almost a perfect copy of his master. Patient removed from my
custody, and placed in a high security area for further examination.
::: Communication Log 1645:54668 Patient known as Sybooth:::
“General _______ seemed extremely pleased in finally capturing his long time nemesis, Rogue Smuggler, Sybooth.”
“The right forearm, scared with R-E-B-E-L from their first encounter, confirmed it was indeed him.” “Drain this one
of EVERYTHING, screamed the General.” “He even went as far as to authorize a Drone-Scan.” “Even I had to do some
research on how to properly do such a treatment.” “But, I did know that the mind changes were irreversible, and that
his existence had ended.
:::Concluding Summary:::
All patients with the exception of Thimo, have been a complete loss. No information retrieved, nor any will’s broken.
I highly suggest immediate termination and salvage of any needed organic parts for future study, before sedation ends.
Prisoners HIGHLY DANGEROUS, all known security measures to be taken and followed…..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,Shhhhhhhhhggdfjsfjdsgjk;
Wlklbvklbkfdbkfl;bnkklkk… .jfdshfioe w[f;[lcoi]fd;l]ewa[pf\ewf;\ ];p;][ l[pkre[a]dpfl k[pdiepoal][sp]Q[O-0E2385I VO43 8-GK-EW8040T-
:::Transmission Ended, slice failed……..
:::Holo-Net Transmission 12541:256599:001457:::
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Voodez
Fri Mar 18, 2005 12:27 pm
#2
a good read that -great effort! 
Message Edited by Voodez on 03-18-2005 07:28 PM
JWing
Fri Mar 18, 2005 12:30 pm
#3
I wrote it as a history of our guild, as well as a nice send off for all my old guildmates that lost all hopes for this game.
thx...
thx...
Akiram_Glockem
Fri Mar 18, 2005 4:23 pm
#5
All the green makes my eyes bleed, but otherwise it was a good story.
Tans, browns, fuzzy colors
NickHeel
Sat Mar 19, 2005 1:01 am
#7
If I may offer a little suggestion on future RPs: add a bit of "easy on the eyes" colors here and there. It helps the mind break up the layers of white text so it's easier to read 
Great job though I'd love to see more of these popping up! Keep 'em coming, JWing
I'd love to see more of these popping up! Keep 'em coming, JWing
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