Smuggler Archive
Thread: The Dallet Series Smuggler Fiction. 3.0 Now Playing
KuroiArashi
Wed Nov 24, 2004 8:41 am
#183
Wow! Great job Frank! The thing I find most intriguing about the story's progression is that while Dallet's re-awakening starts in a place from which everything is fleeing, Petra seems to be getting drawn inexorably towards him. This is shaping up to beone hell of a reunion (at least, I hope it is
). Thanks for taking us along for the ride, and keep up the good work!
). Thanks for taking us along for the ride, and keep up the good work!Message Edited by KuroiArashi on 11-24-2004 10:42 AM
FrankLee
Wed Nov 24, 2004 11:17 am
#184
KuroiArashi wrote:Wow! Great job Frank! The thing I find most intriguing about the story's progression is that while Dallet's re-awakening starts in a place from which everything is fleeing, Petra seems to be getting drawn inexorably towards him. This is shaping up to beone hell of a reunion (at least, I hope it isMessage Edited by KuroiArashi on 11-24-2004 10:42 AM
Excellent, I wondered if anyone would catch that. Not that I want to clutter it up too much with a glut of symbolism, but the division between light and dark defies straightforward definition.
Didn't want to let anyone think that I've forgotten Petra.
DarkTrout
Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:45 pm
#186
Haven't seen anyone else do this so Wednesday I sat around and copied all the story text to
a file for easier reading. Figured that now I'm done I would let even have at it. I'll
try to add to it as FrankLee adds to the story. BTW, if you don't want it up Frank just
PM me and I'll take it down.
(hope this clicky works, if not you know how to cut and paste)
dalletseris.rtf
a file for easier reading. Figured that now I'm done I would let even have at it. I'll
try to add to it as FrankLee adds to the story. BTW, if you don't want it up Frank just
PM me and I'll take it down.
(hope this clicky works, if not you know how to cut and paste)
dalletseris.rtf
DarkTrout
Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:47 pm
#187
aww nuts! misspelled the file name but hey the clicky still works!
Enjoy!
Enjoy!
DarkTrout
Fri Nov 26, 2004 4:48 pm
#188
oh crap I started a new page too...
Ok, I think I'll stop now
Ok, I think I'll stop now
FrankLee
Fri Nov 26, 2004 5:21 pm
#189
I don't care what format it's in so long as it's credited properly. And unaltered of course.
I did this for my own archives, but since I'm writing at home this week my records are all messed up. Happy Thanksgiving anyway!
I did this for my own archives, but since I'm writing at home this week my records are all messed up. Happy Thanksgiving anyway!
DarkTrout
Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:26 pm
#190
Yup, all left as is... only things I took out were comments, except for the droid POV and your
sig. All your info is up at the top of the file.
sig. All your info is up at the top of the file.
FrankLee
Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:19 pm
#192
C'mon, it's the holiday season. Things are busy.
Actually, I've got about two-thirds of the next one written already, just got to iron out a couple more plot wrinkles and proof it. Maybe tonight, since I forgot to bring a book to read. Probably not though, since I'll be busy with some rush-rush work.
I hear smugglers might be getting the long-awaited realignment, and I am pleased.
Actually, I've got about two-thirds of the next one written already, just got to iron out a couple more plot wrinkles and proof it. Maybe tonight, since I forgot to bring a book to read. Probably not though, since I'll be busy with some rush-rush work.
I hear smugglers might be getting the long-awaited realignment, and I am pleased.
KCcrusher
Mon Dec 06, 2004 12:12 pm
#195
Yay! I can't wait, Frank. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next installment.
Keep up the great work. I hope you submit this to a publisher. I feel it is that good.