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Thread: X-Wing: The Nalera Conflict

Halyn
Thu Sep 15, 2005 4:26 pm
#1

This story is based loosely around a series of quests found in the Tatooine system, and is set post-Yavin.The main character is, of course, myself, Zabrak pilot Halyn Lance, with cameos by other pilots I've flown with and against on Starsider, as well as ship names, squadron names, and so forth. This certainly won't be novel-length by any means, but I hope you enjoy it. I wrote some of this as a story for my guild, but quit working on it a long time ago, and only recently have come up with the motivation to continue working on it. I hope you enjoy it.



"Five, break left!"


Halyn Lance's X-wing snap-rolled on its port s-foil and broke "up" relative to the fighter's new position. Of course, in space, there's no true up or down. The pilot rammed the throttle forward roughly, the acceleration pushing him back in his pilot's couch. A moment later, an explosion rattled the Rebel fighter as the TIEInterceptorpursuing him was shattered by Sabre Six's laserfire.


"Thanks, Abi, I owe you one."


Sabre Six's X-wing slid up beside his, mere meters away. "I'll take that as a Corellian ale when we get back home, Five," the Twi'lek pilot responded cheerfully.


"Cut the chatter." Sabre Leader's order dominated the channel. "We're not done yet."


But the battle was nearly over. The dozen X-wings from Sabre Squadron had destroyed nearly twice their own number without loss, and their charge, the YKL-37r Nova Courier-class light freighter, the Silver Dawn, was nearing the edge of the Talus gravity well. The two TIE Interceptors remaining were well outside the combat zone and doing their best to be even further away from the deadly Rebel squadron.


"Sabre Leader, this is Silver Dawn. We're ready for the jump. Waiting for jump coordinates."


"Roger, stand by," Commander Li Coden replied. "Transmitting in a moment."


The X-wing squadron reformed behind the squadron's leader, staying a kilometer off the freighter as it prepared to jump.


The mission had been a wild success. The freighter, carrying a shipment of small arms for Alliance guerilla forces, had requested escort, as its captain suspected the vessel's cargo and destination had been leaked to the Empire. In response, Sabre Squadron had been dispatched from a converted mining vessel to meet up with the ship near the Corellian shipyards. The captain's suspicions had proven correct, but the Imperial fighter group sent to capture the freighter had not expected an escort, and had paid dearly for their mistake.


To ensure the cargo's safe delivery to the Alliance, its original flight plan was scratched, and it was now receiving new navigational data from Sabre Leader's astromech droid. All for morals and ideals, Halyn thought wryly.


"Thanks, Sabre Leader. Jumping now," the freighter captain's voice sang over the comm. A moment later, the little freighter flickered with pseudomotion and disappeared into hyperspace.


"Looks like we're done here," Sabre Nine offered.


"Aye. Stand by for my jump information back to the Wraith." Li's voice had just the tiniest catch in it.


A moment later, one of the comm buttons lit up on Halyn's console. He groaned. Not good. "Yes, Lead?" he said after he tapped the insistently blinking button.


"I've got special orders for you."


"Wonderful."


"These are from someone in high command. Apparently you impressed someone up there."


Or maybe someone up there knows who I really am, Halyn added silently. Aloud, he said, "Must've. What're my instructions?"


"My R5 is transferring them now." Li hesitated. "I doubt I'll see you for a while, Five, so be careful--I want you to come back."


"You all know I'm blasterproof," Halyn blustered.


"Only if your ego could power your shields." Li laughed. "Good luck, Hal. Hope to see you soon."


The channel died, and his astromech, Deuce, chirped a successful tone. The Zabrak glanced at the main monitor on his HUD. "Files received," he muttered. "Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful."


Across the squadron's channel, Li's voice rose with orders: "All X-wings, launch into hyperspace on my mark." In the other fighters, Halyn knew, a counter would be ticking down on their CMDs. Not his.


A moment that felt like an eternity later, eleven X-wings entered hyperspace. The remaining pilot opened the first data file, searching for jump coordinates.




Halyn Lance -- Rara Avis Flight School
Common sense is highly uncommon.
...has mastered the Pilot profession.
"I'll type this slowly so even Imperials can understand..."--Michael Stackpole, RS IRC
Halyn
Thu Sep 15, 2005 7:05 pm
#2

The X-wing's hotengine nacelles hissed in the light rain as water was superheated into steam. Halyn pulled the cloak over his head and slid off the nose of the fighter, landing lightly on the cobblestones below. The cloak laid heavily over his shoulders in the consistent Rori moisture and, as was typical on the swampy moon, cloying, chokingly still air. The pilot checked to ensure the old Power 5 pistol was still secure at his hip, then briskly walked towards the hanger's only portal.


He was still a bit shaken from his flight in. The Naboo system was heavily occupied by Imperial forces, and he had narrowly avoided a Star Destroyer and two separate flights of TIE fighters on patrol. While his forged ID and transponder codes held up when he had commed Narmle for landing clearances, he was not at all confident that they would've fooled roving TIE commanders or a Star Destroyer's powerful sensor suite.


The Zabrak stepped into a surprisingly stiff, but slightly relieving, gust of wind as he stepped out of the starport's cavernous entrance. The cloak's hood pulled slightly at his horns, but he ignored the pressure as he took stock of his surroundings, trying to get his bearings.


Even under the cloak, he could tell he stood out from the natives of the planet. His flight boots gave him away easily--the civilians seemed to prefer a soft wrapped boot, instead of Halyn's solid, if worn, footwear. His flightsuit was dark blue, instead of the standard orange X-wing pilots generally preferred, but it was still a far cry from the dark, soft tunics and trousers of the Narmle citizens. A young woman walking past the entrance to the starport gave him an odd look, further destroying any trace of confidence in his ability to blend in. I might as well put on my dress uniform and parade down the street, he thought wryly. Any trace of a smile on his lips was quickly killed by the all-too-familiar sight of stormtrooper armor patrolling the streets.


Hugging the cloak more tightly around himself, and finally oriented, he made his way quickly, without incident, to the cantina where he was supposed to meet his contact.


Studying the sign over the door, Halyn read the barely-legible words: "The Blue Tusk Cat." He shook his head. This place looks seedier than a bar on Nar Shaddaa.


The door opened at his touch, however, and he shrugged the water off his cloak in the entryway. Descending further into the bar, he looked around. Pretty empty. Good. The only denziens in the cantina, for that matter, were a pair of drunken Sullustans in an alcove booth, huffing in some weird sound the Zabrak assumed to be the Sullustan equivalen to laughter. With one further glance around to check for anything out of place, Halyn descended the last few steps to the floor of the cantina and crossed the open space to the bar. Pulling up a stool, he waited patiently for the bartender, listening to an old jukebox play the recent hit "Smoky Dreams."


Halyn looked around the cantina, fingers drumming a steady beat on the countertop. Used to spend a lot of time in places like this. Hell, I shot up a few places like this, way back when. Whatever happened to those days of chasing fame and glory? Heh...well, I guess I know what happened to that. Never would've guessed that I'd wind up sitting in an empty bar waiting for some Alliance datapusher to give me some operation that apparently only I can accomplish.


Whatever this is, it can't be good. I mean...what's so urgent, anyways? I heard about the Death Star at Yavin getting vaped by Alliance pilots. There shouldn't be any...


His line of thought was interrupted by the bartender's arrival. An Ithorian, the bartender spoke no Basic. Instead, he gestured to the protocol droid following him.


"I'd like a Jawa juice," Halyn said carefully.


"You have offworld tastes? How fitting, seeing as you're an outlander," the protocol droid responded.


Halyn tried not to smile--the protocol droid was obviously malfunctioning a bit from its slightly snippy tone. "I've always had a preference for Tatooine drink."


"This way," the Ithorian grunted in passable Basic, gesturing towards the back of the bar.


The Rebel pilot rose and followed the bartender into a small room behind the bar lined with bottles from a thousand different worlds. The room was cool, helping maintain a better environment for the alcohol, and the lights were dim. A worn computer terminal stood in one corner, apparently used to keep inventory of the bartender's stock. But all this was taken in secondary, in peripheral vision, for Halyn was focused completely on the third occupant of the room.





Halyn Lance -- Rara Avis Flight School
Common sense is highly uncommon.
...has mastered the Pilot profession.
"I'll type this slowly so even Imperials can understand..."--Michael Stackpole, RS IRC
Halyn
Thu Sep 15, 2005 10:06 pm
#3

Er...if anyone's reading this, feel free to post comments. Don't worry about breaking the story up.

Please? Someone? So I know I'm not writing to myself?

Message Edited by Halyn on 09-15-2005 11:18 PM




Halyn Lance -- Rara Avis Flight School
Common sense is highly uncommon.
...has mastered the Pilot profession.
"I'll type this slowly so even Imperials can understand..."--Michael Stackpole, RS IRC
S-1-l2-H-C
Thu Sep 15, 2005 10:32 pm
#4

looking good, cant wait for the rest of it.



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ViperWolf
Thu Sep 15, 2005 10:38 pm
#5

Loving it, keep it coming.


By the way, I more badass than that! Where's my cool action sence where I take out 4 ISDs solo?



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Fatty182
Fri Sep 16, 2005 1:08 am
#6

Loving it too Can't wait for more



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Halyn
Fri Sep 16, 2005 7:14 am
#7


If nothing else, the rebuilt Z-95 Headhunter surpassed the Zabrak's expectations by a wide margin. He surveyed the ship from nose to stern, amazed at the work done on the vessel. He studied it with an experienced eye, dumbfounded by the amount of work Alliance intel had done on the snubfighter.


The Z-95 had clearly been rebuilt from the frame up. The sensor suite had been augmented with the newest array of equipment. The engines had been reconstructed using a combination of the old Subpro stock drives with the new Incom fusial thrust engines mounted on the X-wing, boosting the old fighter's maneuverability and speed by ten percent. The triple-blasters had been replaced by the Taim & Bak IX-4 laser cannons that gave an X-wing its punch. The shield generators had been reconditioned. The hyperdrive purred sweetly. The armor plating on the hull had even been replaced with the newest, strongest stock available.


Most surprising, though, was the astromech slot. Though the X-wing and the older Y-wing both were designed around the use of an R-series astromech droid, the old Z-95 Headhunter followed a more common philosophy of a fighter only needing the pilot. This Z-95, though, had been apparently been rebuilt with the intention of bringing it inline with the Rebel ideal of having a backup in combat. The astromech slot was covered by a heavy armor plate, giving it a more standard Z-95 appearance--allowing it to pass for "stock."


Hal grinned at his red-and-white R2 astromech droid. "Waddya think, Deuce?" he asked.


The droid whistled and rolled forward, stopping near the fighter. The Zabrak grunted with the effort, but managed to wrestle the astromech up onto the wing of the Headhunter. From there, the droid managed to settle itself in the slot, plugging in. Halyn grinned and closed the armor cover, then slid into the cockpit.


The instrument array had been modernized, too. The pilot smiled as he studied the displays, beginning the fighter's preflight sequence. The fighter hummed to life quietly, smooth as Nubian silk. Amazing, the pilot thought. I never would have thought a Z-95 could be rebuilt like this. Hell, from spec, she'll perform better than any other Z-95 in the galaxy--almost to an X-wing's standards.


The repulsorlifts whined as the pilot gently eased the ship out of the docking bay. When he was clear of Narmle airspace, he kicked in the sublight drives, thrilling in the powerful surge of acceleration as the snubfighter gracefully ascended into vaccuum. The last pilot liked his g's a bit more than me, though, the Zabrak noted. He dialed the inertial compensator from .95 up to .97. The higher setting was still low enough to give the pilot a good feel for space, but at .95 Halyn had run into problems before in combat where pulling high-g maneuvers pushed him around in the cockpit more than he'd liked.


Still, this Z-95 was a sweet ride for a Headhunter, he decided. Throwing the craft into an easy helix, he smiled as the craft responded ably to his commands. "Waddya think, Deuce? Will she do?"


PERFORMANCE ACCEPTABLE, the astromech's tooted reply scrolled across the pilot's HUD. Halyn shook his head at the droid's typically truncuated reply.


Already loaded with the data for the jump, Deuce whistled that the Z-95 was ready for the hyperspace jump. A moment later, the snubfighter vanished into the vast nothingness known as hyperspace.





Halyn Lance -- Rara Avis Flight School
Common sense is highly uncommon.
...has mastered the Pilot profession.
"I'll type this slowly so even Imperials can understand..."--Michael Stackpole, RS IRC
Higginsis
Fri Sep 16, 2005 7:28 am
#8

Better than half the fan fiction i've read on stuff like the force.net.

Quite enjoyable.



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Halyn
Sun Sep 18, 2005 10:51 am
#9

The clock ticked off the last minute of the jump's duration, second by second. Halyn drummed his fingers restlessly on one of his displays, the only "free" space available in the cockpit. Putting a hyperdrive on a ship this small was a bad idea. Period. The person who came up with the idea should try being strapped in one of these damned cockpits for a three-day jump. Bet he'd change his mind.


The long hyperspace jump had been taxing for the pilot. While the Zabrak wasn't claustrophobic, three days of absolute nothingness except the mottled blue-white blur of hyperspace was not entertaining, or even mildly engaging. He had slept as much of the jump as he could. Most of the rest of his time he had spent reviewing the data Alliance Intelligence had given him for the mission. He could nearly recite the entire contents of those files from memory after the solid hours of studying, from profiles on the Naleran miners to the layout of the entire system to the different factions--Imperial, Hutt, other criminal elements, security forces, pirate--present in the system. At this point, however, the pilot only wanted a long shower and a good hot meal, two things that couldn't be found on any ship smaller than a blastboat.


Hal ran through a quick checklist as the timer dropped below thirty. Shields were powered up, weapons charged and ready to fire, fusial thrust engines ready to engage when the hyperdrive kicked out, R2 astromech ready, concussion missiles armed and ready. Fuel was over three-quarters yet--hyperdrives sipped fuel, while the sublights gulped it--but his life support reserves were running low. Not a problem, though--I'll be in an inhabited system.


As the timer clicked zero, the Rebel disengaged the hyperdrive, simultaenously powering upthe sublight engines. The blur of hyperspace broke into individual starlines, which snapped back into mere pinpricks of firey light. Of course, those pinpricks were largely obliterated by the presence of a medium freighter parked squarely where no freighter had a right to be.


Halyn cursed fluently in several languages while he wrenched the stick over, pushing the fighter for everything it was worth. It still wasn't enough as his shields scraped the freighter's side, eliciting a squeal from Deuce, a long series of flashes and sparks behind him, and mild burns to the cargo containers strapped to the side of the freighter. A moment later, the Z-95 was clear of the offender, its pilot switching languages as his swearing continued unabated.


He had made it all the way to Rodese before he saw the reason for the freighter's odd positioning. Four TIE fighters circled the freighter like scavengers circling dying prey. "Deuce," he said aloud, "scan comm frequencies. See if there's anything from the TIEs or that freighter."


A moment later, his comm lit up with transmissions: "...go of mineral."


"If we blast you and report we destroyed a shipment of spice, who's going to know the difference?"


"Please, sir! We have families."


"And we have needs that only credits can fill."


Halyn's eyes narrowed. Blackmail, eh? I hate Imp pilots. Aloud, he said, "Hang on, Deuce, we're going to do a live-fire test on this Z-95. I want to see what she'll do."


The astromech's querying chirp was replaced by a wail as the sublight drives roared and the fighter flipped around to face the TIE flight. The Zabrak was all grins as his snubfighter accelerated towards the Imperial group. He dropped his crosshairs over the "eyeball"--Rebel pilot's parlance for the standard TIE line fighter--trailing in the diamond formation, holding fire until his rangefinder dropped to five hundred meters. Squeezing gently, he held the trigger down as the refitted Taim & Baks spat reddish darts of energy.


The trailing TIE exploded. Halyn kicked the Headhunter up on its starboard wing and fired again, but the TIEs scattered. One came around for a head-to-head while the other two, apparently wingman, accelerated away from the attacker.


The head-to-head with the lone TIE lasted a mere second, with neither pilot landing a shot. He's expecting me to try to turn with him so he can use the TIE's superior maneuverability. Not a snowball's chance on Ryloth. Keeping the throttle to the stops, he opened fire on the wingpair of fleeing TIEs, catching one with a lucky shot that sheereda hexagonal radiator panel off. A moment later the ship exploded.


The eyeball pilot from the head-to-head had brought his ship around and pursued the Z-95. Hal smiled as he watched his scopes carefully, judging his timing carefully. Almost casually, he wrenched his ship through a tight 180-degree turn and headed back towards the first TIE. Again they exchanged fire in the brief head-to-head, and again, neither of them connected.


"Deuce?" Hal asked. The astromech stopped wailing. "Are the shields on that freighter down?" When the R2 answered affirmatively, he smiled. This'll be easy. "When I tell you to," he said, watching the remaining two TIEs form up together and accelerate towards him, "backfire the sublights. I'll need to go from full throttle to nothing in a split second. Override the fail-safes if you have to."


Ignoring the astromech's protest, Halyn twisted his fighter around a bit, throwing off the long-range shots from the TIEs as he set his course for the freighter. Eh...that's going to be a tighter fit than I thought.


The freighter hung motionless in space. Not fully loaded, there were several gaps on the load where normally a cargo container would be fastened. Watching his aft as he continued to maneuver, he saw the TIEs begin to break formation. Smiling tightly, he dove straight for a gap in the freighter's load, praying that he hadn't misjudged the size of the gap. The TIEs spread out further, preparing to pounce on him on the other side--one TIE going over the freighter, one under. Child's play for tactics, the Rebel thought.


The Z-95 was an even tighter fit than he thought it would be, but he just managed to slide into the gap. "Now!" he shouted.


The old Headhunter screamed horribly and the pilot was thrown hard into the pilot's harness, but the snubfighter stopped dead in space. Halyn pulled the stick back slightly and squeezed the trigger, watching the TIE that came over the freighter fly straight into his laserfire and evaporate. He pushed the fighter's nose down and kept the trigger squeezed, but the last TIE only took a crippling hit.


"Deuce? Open a channel to that TIE pilot." A moment later,a button on his comm unit lit up. "Imperial pilot, I suggest you go back to picking fights in the bar--you keep this up, you'll get yourself killed."


"Who are you?" the Imperial snarled. "I'll kill you for this!"


"Now that is motivation for me," the Zabrak replied dryly. "See you later, Imp." He cut the channel. "Well, that was fun," he said to his astromech. "Let's go find some miners."


Bringing the Z-95 around to face deeper in-system, he pushed the throttle forward and silently reveled in the thrill of acceleration as the fighter rocketed closer to the twin stars and the asteroid field.




Halyn Lance -- Rara Avis Flight School
Common sense is highly uncommon.
...has mastered the Pilot profession.
"I'll type this slowly so even Imperials can understand..."--Michael Stackpole, RS IRC
werehere
Sun Sep 18, 2005 10:58 am
#10

JUst have to say you got a lot of free time lol


very cool tho


LeaphChausew
Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:58 pm
#11







Halyn wrote:

Er...if anyone's reading this, feel free to post comments. Don't worry about breaking the story up.

Please? Someone? So I know I'm not writing to myself?

Message Edited by Halyn on 09-15-2005 11:18 PM





wow. That is a coincidence and a half. My T5 Ghrag movie's storyboard as it stands right now has a scene where you and Leaph are going over the Station's starfighter manifest. While doing so, Leaph points out the two A-wings the station had for long range patrols are complete write offsand your next line actually describes the high maintenance aspects of the A-wing.


Kind of fits in nicely that now I know where Halyn obtained that info




Message Edited by LeaphChausew on 09-18-2005 04:02 PM

mclouj
Sun Sep 18, 2005 7:05 pm
#12

Extremely cool and well written story! You've got a great narrative style, much better than those hacks Lucas hires for writing the EU novels...


Keep it coming!





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Erahth
Sun Sep 18, 2005 7:58 pm
#13

More please.

I've personal-stickied this one



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