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Thread: Yesterday I felt special (semi RP)
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bmeenan
Sat Jun 12, 2004 9:52 am
#2
Great job and very interesting. Well done all the way around!
The only constructive critism I would offer would be from a structure point of view (in terms of when to break up your paragraphs and such). But that's just nit-picking and a skill you can polish over time.
Again sweet story.
ALLEYSPADE
Sat Jun 12, 2004 11:24 am
#4
Great story!!!
(Now only if it was this easy in game *sigh*)
Belegdae
Sun Jun 13, 2004 8:47 am
#6
I just have to say great story. The only bad thing, did you have to kill your opponent just to please the merc? 
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