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Thread: Yesterday I felt special (semi RP)

Sithsuck
Sat Jun 12, 2004 9:14 am
#1

Sorry

Message Edited by Sithsuck on 06-12-2004 09:15 AM



Samau Kil
Freelance Mercanary and Bounty Hunter

bmeenan
Sat Jun 12, 2004 9:52 am
#2

Great job and very interesting. Well done all the way around!


The only constructive critism I would offer would be from a structure point of view (in terms of when to break up your paragraphs and such). But that's just nit-picking and a skill you can polish over time.


Again sweet story.




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Sithsuck
Sat Jun 12, 2004 10:22 am
#3

thanks



Samau Kil
Freelance Mercanary and Bounty Hunter

ALLEYSPADE
Sat Jun 12, 2004 11:24 am
#4

Great story!!! (Now only if it was this easy in game *sigh*)
ChilastraBH
Sat Jun 12, 2004 6:55 pm
#5

well written
Belegdae
Sun Jun 13, 2004 8:47 am
#6

I just have to say great story. The only bad thing, did you have to kill your opponent just to please the merc?



Sulris Carandae
Sithsuck
Sun Jun 13, 2004 9:20 am
#7


Its was a 3 incap death, hit him too hard?



Samau Kil
Freelance Mercanary and Bounty Hunter

Sithsuck
Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:13 pm
#8

my old rp topic



Samau Kil
Freelance Mercanary and Bounty Hunter

Bongzai
Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:28 pm
#9

5 stars from me


Nice work



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