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Thread: The Story of a Jedi: Iwici Kujo (Long read)

PhantomFF
Sat Oct 01, 2005 1:01 pm
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My name is Iwici Kujo, I am a Jedi...Very few people actually know what this means...this is my story





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Hmm, well ok My name is Iwici. Haha this is weird talking to a box. Matt gave me one of these things for wookie life day...that crazy... Anyways he is making me try it all out so here goes. I'm 15 and strong, one of the best shots in all of Corillia! That is where I was born, right outside of Coronet about 10 klicks from the big trading outpost. Matt and I are best buds and we pretty much do everything together. We are gonna be mercenaries in a few years haha, our names will be known throughout the Galaxy! Right now I'm working on shooting these huge moths...but they hurt alot more than I thought a bug would. Funny how things like to attack you when you shoot at them... still its good target practice. I nailed one from 100 feet the other....


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Wow, has it really been 6 years? This thing IS old haha. Well Matt and I have gotten into the mercenary buisness just like I said we would, but I learned a few things since then...like I'm really not the best shot there is and people are willing to hurt you back. Anyways, Matt wanted me to continue making this journal, because we got a new job. But this one is diffrent, its going to take several weeks in the swamps of Rori. Why we are taking out an imperial outpost from there I have no clue, but the pay is good. Who knows? maybe the rebels can make a good career for us...


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Well the insertion was successful...and we've made it into the swamps with little trouble. I'm suprised it was this easy...you'd think they would have this place guarded pretty tight. I have a very bad feeling about this strike, and so does Matt, to save myself the trouble..I'm going to make this the last entry until this job is finished...


"You done?"


Yea I just finished, alright let’s finish the strike, are the bombs in place?


"yes, you have the particle cannon ready?"


You bet... alright lets do this...


*sounds of blaster and rocket fire echo*


Hey watch your lef...DUCK!! **edit** **edit**!!


where is that comlink they gave me...


Hey! Hey! Mission compromised....its a trap!! I cant last much longer...don’t know if matt is even alive...Need extraction NOW!


*flamethrower goes off*


Crap! Where is that shuttle!! I'm almost out of fuel....


*flamethrower dies*


crap...get off of me! *grunts, a loud crack is heard* Yea! Take that you stormtrooper frea


*blaster fire goes off*


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Hmm, apparently they saved the data from my former life in this thing... Intriguing. Well I wont focus on that...weakness now. I will start the recording from when I woke up I guess...



I was there, somehow still functioning. There was a blur in front of my eyes, but that’s impossable..how can you see if your dead?I woke to find myself on a table. Strange...it seems so clean in a room like this. I tried to see if I was indeed alive, but for some reason I couldn’t move my left arm. Very strange..and my eyes wouldn't unblur, like something was preventing them..then it hit me..



Binding pain!! Like nothing I have ever felt before! My eyes burned like they were on fire. My entire body wracked with pain, and I strained against my bindings. Everything felt like it was burning, broken, and dying. Yet I was not dying, the pain if anything became clearer the more I struggled, I willed my entire body to convulse, and my left arm moved, slicing all of my bindings on the bed.



The pain started to subside as soon as I sat upright, amazingly my sight was clearer than it ever was, excepting a strange red tinge across certain items. However I didn't worry about that... I was more concerned with my arm. It wasn't made of flesh any longer, it was metal....mechanical....and once again I couldn't move it at all. I had no clue how I moved it in the first place...but I saw how it cut the bindings on the bed...the outer edge of it was serrated and looked as if it had an electronic edge. I spent the next 5-10 minutes studying every detail of the arm, finding out everything I could about this....thing that had replaced my arm. During my examination I found a button on the inner edge of the hand..in pressing it the blade sprung to life with a laser edging, much like a laser scalpel. Then I felt a strange warmth from the arm...like it was my own, but without pain.



I then looked at my surroundings, it appeared that I was inside of a room that was a pristine white. The bed was in a corner, and a refresher unit was up across the oppisite wall. Something was missing but I couldn't see what it was...Then I realized there wasn't a door in the room. There was no way out, only a single slot in the wall where apparently meals were to be dropped.



Then I realized that my arm wasn't the only thing that was replaced, I sensed within myself that many of my normal components (bones, muscles) were made of mechanical components. Apparently my eyes were modified too, but there was no mirror in the room so I couldn't see what I looked like.



I spent the next few hours trying to figure out what exactly I was doing and how to get this weird body of mine to function. At the end of which time I had managed to get my brain to send/receive electronic messages to the new arm. I could move it (albeit slowly) where I wanted and do normal tasks with it. I figured this was enough so I decided to get to bed.



The next day I woke up to find a fresh black jumpsuit next to my bed, a meal on the floor, and to my surprise a modified ASP droid in the corner of my room. I used the refresher, put on the jumpsuit, then went to examine this droid. I found it deactivated with a switch in the back. I turned the switch on...



The asp reached behind its back and pulled out a strange tube, and like from some weird nightmare a lance of light emerged from this tube. It slashed at me, but because of my years as a mercenary I was prepared and leaped out of the way. However this droid would not be put down so easily and continued pursuit of me across my room slicing my bed in half. I had no idea how to fight this...thing..this...lightsaber was a weapon that I couldn't counter in hand to hand combat...but luckily for myself I pressed that hidden button in my mechanical hand by clenching my fists, and the laser blade activated. Taking the risk I put that arm/blade to the lightsaber and to my surprise the saber did not penetrate the blade. Apparently the laser blade of my arm could stand up to lightsabers as long as it was activated. Once the droid's blade was occupied by my arm, I took my good arm and pulled out its main circuit cord then kicked it in half effectively shorting half the droids circuits and disabling its combat abilities.



I took this blade from the ASP and activated it. The saber was a very strong viridian color, it seemed very warm in my hand. I took the saber and practiced with it for the next few minutes, chopping up the bed some more and then working on the droid. It seemed very good at cutting things...so I had an idea. I went ahead and used it to cut the wall by the food slot, to my surprise it fell easily with the saber. I began to wonder why this was again so easy, and started to become more cautious.



The hole led to an empty hallway, I followed this hallway until I came to a room with a high ceiling. There was a figure in dark robes kneeling on the floor of this room. I went up to him in order to ask him where I was, but when I got within 10 feet he jumped up and activated another lightsaber, but strangely this one had a blade coming out of both ends of the tube. Unsure I activated my own saber and charged, hearing a voice in my head saying to attack or die. I turned on the blade of my arm and attacked with both. However I was outmatched from the outset and the battle become more and more a desperate attempt at survival on my part. Both my body and my mind ached with the labor of forcing my new body to fight and attack this person. Then I heard the voice in my head again, "Use your anger against him, you are impervious to damage." Thinking on this..I realized something... I let on of his attacks through and his saber hit my leg...but couldn't go through. The pain blazed into me, but his saber was stuck in my leg...and I decapitated him as he stood. Then I hewed his body as it lay in anger, and to my amazement my leg wound healed before my eyes.



"Very well done...my new apprentice." Said the voice that I had heard earlier.



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Little known to me, I was being watched by the imperials for some time before my capture and subsequent finding of myself. This dark jedi had found me a viable force candidate, but he sensed too little evil in me. So in order to make me his loyal follower, he performed medical experiments on my body making me become almost half mechanical. He made myself be in almost constant pain by reforming my bones and bone marrow with a mix of durasteel and cortosis, and he even modified my red blood cells and platelets to heal most wounds in a matter of seconds. My eyes could see into the infrared range, my senses and my strength seemed almost 10 times as acute as they once were, and for some reason I could sense things around me even without seeing them.


Unfortunately, my friend Matt was not deemed Force Sensitive and transferred to another experimental unit. His weakness however became my advantage as I was selected to become adark jediapprentice. This honor was mine and with a master and a new body I will make this universe ours and extinguish all weakness within it. My master will show me the way, for he is not weak and is alot stronger than any other person I have ever known.


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Well I've been studying the force for quite some time now, my master deems me ready to start puting my new powers to work. I'm being sent to assasinate some polititions on an old astroid mining cluster. This should be quite fun...



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I’m now on this new mining cluster… there is a Jedi here…I’ve taken care of 2 leaders on the planet…however they surprised me by showing the intelligence to call the Jedi to their aid. I will still succeed in my mission…but I think this will be a bit tougher than it was originally.


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I’ve been moving in the shadows for weeks now…it is time to reveal myself to the Jedi.


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Heh…..heh…..he…. It appears that Jedi aren’t as strong as legends say. I went to where the Jedi was in hiding…and he didn’t stand a chance. I must admit however, that the Jedi did present a challenge. I attacked him head on while he had just reassured a chancellor of the planet of his safety…his saber ignited we fought through the halls and to the outer air lock. I chose this moment to activate my arm and use my cybernetic strength in order to catch him off guard…he didn’t die immediately. The fight went on, and I was slowly wearing him down. I was fed up with the waste of my time however…the force surged through me and I held him up, cut a whole in the air shield… and threw him out. After this the council of the asteroid gave into my demands, and my master was pleased.


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I’m being tracked… apparently the Jedi has friends that were watching for him. He survived (although I must admit how he did it eludes me) and now him and his master were tracking my every move. I have set the trap…they will fall…


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This isn’t Iwici…I am Jedi Knight Zan…and I have captured this dark Jedi and his files…the master was right, he is strong in the force. I am sure he will make a powerful Jedi. My padawan warned me about his cybernetic enhancements. So we began to track him down…


We tracked him into the middle of a mining city, where he was staying in an apartment full of people. He was well covered, and we needed to try and get him away from innocents. Luck seemed to be on our side as we observed the building, we saw him walking out apparently on a mission. We followed him into a decrepit factory, where he went straight into what seemed to be an administrator’s office and waited. We decided that now would be the time, and charged into the room with our sabers alight. Instead of surprise on his face, we saw a cruel smile…


“You fell for it…”


There was a huge explosion and the room was suddenly filled with liquid fire and small explosions…I used the force to protect me from the flames, but my padawan wasn’t as quick… He screamed in agony as the flames started to consume him…I found him and used the force to protect him as well, but he was already covered in flames. He had gone into the Jedi healing trance in order to save his own life, but it would take many months before he recovered fully from his wounds.


Apparently my survival of this ordeal did not go unnoticed, while the assassin was no longer in the room with us, (I suspect he had a secret escape route) he had left us 3 packs of proton grenades that were set to blow as soon as the fire had subsided. (Temperature trigger) The trigger mechanism was so sensitive that the force itself could have set it off, so I grabbed the padawan and cut my way out of the room with my light saber…


As I ran from the building, I felt a small wave of heat hit me, and I looked back to see the building literally disintegrating as I watched it…however the assassin was experienced with people surviving his attempts, he gave a battle cry and attacked me with his saber and his arm…


The battle continued for a while on the ground in the middle of an abandoned street, I was only breaking even with him as I couldn’t find a weakness in his 2 handed strategy. However, the force guided me towards my padawan and I had an idea. I used the force to summon the padawan’s saber to my hand using it to disarm the assassin’s saber. He was far from finished apparently… as he deflected the next blow with precision. The battle continued however this time I had the advantage, he used his arm in a strange sweeping motion which pushed both my sabers aside and I saw he had a hold out blaster in his other hand. He fired and grazed my shoulder while I swept the gun from him with a kick of my own.


Apparently he decided he couldn’t win at that point and held his mechanical arm to my face, a hole in his hand told me that it was another gun and as I dodged, a grapple hook emerged from the point of the arm facing upward going towards the nearest rooftop. I severed the cord before he could get into the air, however he kept rising into the air… He had a jetpack on under his cloak and was using it to escape, so I used the force to crush the jetpack before he could get too far.


He wasn’t expecting this obviously as I finally saw a look of shock on his face, now he was on foot and I knew he couldn’t last long. I swung my saber in to finally destroy this threat only to be deflected by a personal shield right before contact. He than turned towards me with the saber arm and tried to swing down... I severed the arm with a saber and kicked him…causing him to stumble.


It seemed as if it were finally over, however with his good left arm, he took out a flamethrower and started to try and burn me again. I used the force to protect myself again however he tricked my focus by kicking me in the face. Before I could react he had started the flamethrower up again and I suffered minor burns on my face and chest. I had reached my limit and threw my light saber with all my might and it circled behind him…causing the flamethrower pack to act like one of his favorite bombs and consume him in flames. His personal shield must have protected him to some point as he was still alive but badly burned and in need of bacta.


I didn’t think anything of him other than a sith assassin until I found this pad. There is good in him…I know it…


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I am now in the Jedi Order, however this recording device is old and out of date… so I’m going to start a new record and put this into the Jedi archives for all who wonder whether or not it is possible to come back from the dark side…


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-Iwici Kujo

"One of the few true Roleplayer's"
TeenDude
Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:22 pm
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Very nice.



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Glzmo
Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:34 pm
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Very nicely written and very entertaining. However, it doesn't really fit into the timeline SWG is supposed to play in too much (especially the part about the Empire monitoring the "Dark Jedi" as the Empire would rather kill somebody who is Force Sensitive than keep him/her alive). Still, good job with that story.

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PhantomFF
Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:39 pm
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Oh I should have mentioned this is actually in a diffrent timeline than SWG is supposed to be in, I origonally wrote this story for my JKA webclan and modified it for SWG purposes. Our current timeline is after the destruction of the empire (the remnant still exists) where jedi are once again becoming plentiful.


Thanks to all you people who actually took the time to read this whole thing , perhaps you could post your own stories and we can get a Bio thread going.


(BTW: Wasn't it true that Palpatine kept several dark jedi assasin's after the time of the jedi purge? So it could tecnically be one of those and thus this could tecnically fit into the timeline if thought about a bit /shrug)





-Iwici Kujo

"One of the few true Roleplayer's"
Glzmo
Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:52 pm
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PhantomFF wrote:
(BTW: Wasn't it true that Palpatine kept several dark jedi assasin's after the time of the jedi purge? So it could tecnically be one of those and thus this could tecnically fit into the timeline if thought about a bit /shrug)

AFAIR, Palpatine himself didn't really keep any dark Jedi (unless this was mentioned in some wacky comic). Mara Jade was a Force sensitive he kept as his "hand", but she was by no means Jedi.
Some members of the Imperial Inquisition were also force sensitive and able to sense Jedi, but no Jedi per-se and not with much Force powers even without lightsabers, AFAIR.
According to the Expanded Universe, Lord Vader was secretly training Force Users in Jedi/Sith ways as his followers to overthrow the Emperor (including Lord Hethrir, found in the Emperor's retreat in SWG and his wife - but this has been brought up in The Crystal Star, which is one atrocity of a Star Wars book, IMHO ).



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PhantomFF
Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:54 pm
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Nice , I need to read more star wars books haha...cept the New Jedi Order series with the Yuzim Vong (SP?) ....I'm boycotting that series because they killed chewie



-Iwici Kujo

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