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Thread: Singing and Dancing

Jacquelyn
Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:57 am
#1

I am a zabrak dancer/shipwright with some TK. I am generally ATK and participate. I go out of the way to entertain my customers by actually speaking with them and having invigoration conversations. Oftentimes people are so impressed that I can be in a croud of buff-bots and have been developing a steady customer base of good tippers.


Anyway, I used to love to write poetry and so I have been writing poems which I use with the /sing for each line. I create a series of macros with a pause after each line and if I run out of space in a macro, i just call another one in the series.


Anyway here is one of my latest songs. Just wanted to see what you guys think about using dancer/musician as a creative expression outlet



Up jumped a zabrak from the desert bloom bush….
Hopping like a bumble bee and shaking her tush..
Not a care in the world, just happy and free
Just the a cute little zabrak in a jubilee


But along came a womprat looking to snack!
He bounced and he pounced on the little zabrak!
The zabrak fell down unable to stand
She cried out for somebody to give her a hand!


Then along came a kryat out on a stroll
He scooped up the womprat and he swallowed it whole
The scared little Zabrak trembled with fright
But dragon asked the Zabrak "Are you alright?"


The dragon licked the zabrak and helped her to her feet
He had been watching her dance and didn’t come to eat.
He said that the womprat was a tasty little snack..
But he only came over just to cover her back.


The Zabrak was so happy to have her new pal
She asked the kryat to dance and he said "We shall"
She jumped up on the kryat and danced on his back
They wiggled and they jiggled til' the sky turned black


Then along came some hunters who pulled out their guns
They came to kill the kryat and not to have fun
She jumped down from the dragon and begged him to run
But the her friend was tired from dancing having too much fun


She begged all the hunters to let her friend go
But they just kept on shooting at him down from below
So the zabrak ran up and she jumped in their way
She told them how the dragon had saved her that day


She said they were just dancing and having some fun
And she begged for the hunters to put up their guns.
The zabrak said the kryat was just misunderstood
Then she started to dance just as hard as she could


The hunters sat down and watched the little zabrak dance
That was when the kryat saw he had his chance
He ran deep into the caverns and he found a safe place
The hunters saw the happiness on the little zabraks face


Their leader told everyone "Just to put up your guns"
So now my little song ends…
Just the way it begun…


Just a little dancing zabrak out having fun!


DraconianOne
Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:15 am
#2

Love it! It's great.



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Sakura-Ikari
Thu Dec 09, 2004 11:01 pm
#3

*applauds loudly*

great job - 5 stars!


constructive criticism: it is Krayt not Kryat


not to nitpik - i really really really loved your poem!


look forward to more!




Sakura Ikari
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Master Tailor / Imperial Public Relations Chic / Black Eyed Beauty


Ka_ren
Fri Dec 10, 2004 1:01 am
#4

Great song!!! Plan on writing any more?



oh and if you copied this directly from yoru macro there is a mistake in one of the lines.


But the her friend was tired from dancing having too much fun



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