Bio Engineer Archive
Thread: Secret Research Data Revealed
"I should expected (1) as much from the half-brained, semi-illiterate masses that populate the planet. As soon as I get soem(2)free time from the 2 extremely complex and demanding full time jobs that I have I (3) will obtain some more SI and provide a screen shot that will blow your tiny minds out of the water, (4)Then you will come crawling back on your stomach to witness my majesty. Maybe if you monkies (5)took the time to leave your mother's (6)basements and brave a POI or two (I know, you can't handle the pressure, bring along a guild mate to hold your bloated hand) you(7)would discover this for yourselves. Just you wait, start writing your apologyessay now so i (8)can tearit up and spit in your face."
At least most of us are intelligent enough to use proper sentence structure, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization. For your convenience, and ease of learning,I have underlined and annotated the mistakes in your post.
(1): Improper syntax. It should read, "I should have expected".
(2): Improper spelling.
(3): Missing punctuation. There should be a comma between "have" and "I".
(4): Improper punctuation. The comma should be replaced by a period.
(5): Improper spelling.
(6): Improper adjective. As implied by "monkeys" and "basements", this should be plural, i.e. " mothers' "
(7): Missing punctuation. A comma should reside between "hand)" and "you".
(8): Missing capitalization.